It’s a loaded question

Sunday Six

Six unedited sentence from Part Six of You Will Find Your Way

It’s a loaded question, and Dallas holds her breath and thinks until Giselle shoves her pointy elbow into her kidney, “Fine,” she mutters after she starts breathing again. “I’ll be fine. I just need some time to get my self together.”

“Well do it quick. We have to be on campus next week.”

Dallas’ chest seizes and it takes some time before she can breathe again, “Can’t wait.”

Previous Sunday Sixes
December 18 and December 11 and December 4 and November 20

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-Kathryn, the Fake Redhead


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A life-long college sports fan and forever bitter about the country's east coast biases, Kathryn, the Fake Redhead, graduated from the University of Arizona with a BA in Creative Writing, emphasis in poetry because she felt the fiction studies emphasis was too pretentious. She is currently helping other writers hone their craft while she pursues her dreams of becoming a published novelist.

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