This is not remotely an appropriate time.

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Six unedited sentences from the upcoming Part Twenty Four of You Will Find Your Way

This is not remotely an appropriate time.

Dallas looks at Giselle, who just shrugs.

“Well,” she draws the word out for a breath. “What do you want to know?”

Luke’s eyebrow cocks up and he looks a little like he’s about to yell at them, so Dallas shrugs and amends with, “I mean, where do you want me to start?”

“The beginning, would be nice,” he snaps. “They ran DNA. The arm they found was yours.”

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-Kathryn, the Fake Redhead


Author: TheFakeRedhead

A life-long college sports fan and forever bitter about the country's east coast biases, Kathryn, the Fake Redhead, graduated from the University of Arizona with a BA in Creative Writing, emphasis in poetry because she felt the fiction studies emphasis was too pretentious. She is currently helping other writers hone their craft while she pursues her dreams of becoming a published novelist.

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